In some countries, young people from the countryside are moving to larger towns and cities while older people are staying in the countryside. What problems might this cause ? What solutions can help to resolve this issue ?

Today, young people are aiming to

move

out

from

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the

countryside

and start living in

b

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ig city while the elderly population remain living in the

countryside

. In recent years, teenagers are choosing to live in big cities and towns rather than living in the

countryside

.

This

essay will expose what problems

this

could create and what solutions can be created to overcome

this

issue. The lack of opportunities is one of the main and foremost

reason

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for young people to

move

out

from

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of

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the

countryside

. Once

this

happens, some positions available in the

countryside

can not be filled because they require only young people.

For example

, agricultural jobs

involves

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a lot of physical activity, which can not be done by old people. If old people are taken to fill

this

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positions, they might be on risk.

Secondly

, while cities are economically developing, the

countryside

might be going

backward

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.

This

happens because, young people can help communities to grown rapidly by studying, investing and creating new companies.

Lastly

, If old people are left living by themselves, they might face many issues. They need young people able to support them in physical tasks and daily life.

However

,

this

trend might be

sttoped

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stopped

by creating new strategies for young people. It could change, by providing more opportunities for young people in the

countryside

. If the government starts investing more money and creating more jobs, young people will have a reason to stay there.Another solution could be to increase the salary expectation in the

contryside

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countryside

.

often times

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, the salary rates outside big cities are low.

Therefore

, young people do not see working there as worthy.

Moreover

, usually

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the best universities and the best education is found in the cities. Young people want to get access to it, so they do not have another choice but to

move

out to the big cities. Once, more universities and better education

is

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provided in the

countryside

,

therer

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there

will be no need to

move

out to the cities. In conclusion,

although

the circumstances might not be the same in the big cities and the

countryside

, it can

be potentially change

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. By fostering the

economy

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growth and providing more opportunities for the

younths

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youths

.