Children should go school or teach at home. Discuss both aspects and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that children education is important.
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it is sometimes thought they should go
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chool in order to get educated,
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view is that homeschooling is enough. In my opinion, I support the latter's view as kids get more time to learn not only course work but extra-curricular activities as well. On the one hand, supporters of homeschooling argue that
this
method has many advantages over others.
This
is because students can learn in their comfort and there no need to follow schedule hours, and even they can spend more time on the subjects which are difficult.
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, they would
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able to understand and practice many life skills, which never teach any schools.,
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, cooking, finance, and farming and so on. Since YouTube is widely available
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if any doubt arises on a particular topic can be easily resolved by searching the portion on the application.
On the other hand
, opponents of the above- mentioned regular 9 to 4 schooling think that
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structured learning as teachers who are trained to
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educate
student.
In other words
, they are in an environment, which solely formed for providing education.
This
also
enhances kids' socialisation and communication skills when they interact with others in the classroom.
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, expert teachers instruct them on various topics and clarify their doubts there itself. In conclusion, a group of people who support the regular schooling while opponents argue that the homeschooling is better. I firmly think that when a child is taught at
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ouse, he gets more time to focus on the academic than non-academic subjects, when it compares.
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