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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that a vehicle that utilizes fossil fuel for its operation should not be used and electric cars should be employed as a substitute. I completely agree with
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 notion because
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electricity driven
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 cars do not cause environmental pollution,
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 as
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 contamination, and it is economical.
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 with, electric cars do not cause pollution to the environment
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 why it should be used. It utilizes
electricity
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 to operate and it does not emit carbon dioxide and other
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 pollutants.
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, the carbon footprint will be reduced, resulting in
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cleaner
air
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 and the environment. Prime examples of these are the cars that are manufactured by Tesla Company. Their
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 products employ batteries to store electric energy that powers them.
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, a fossil-fueled vehicle emits harmful byproducts
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 as greenhouse gases that pollute the atmosphere. It is truly necessary to use electric cars to lessen
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 pollution and cleaner surroundings.
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, electric cars are economical to use. The
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 of
electricity
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 to operate is cheaper than
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ossil-fueled
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.
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 is because
electricity
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 is produced through a
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cost effective
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 way like a windmill, hydroelectric power plant and solar panel. In a study conducted by a non- Government group, Vehicle Efficiency Limited, the average operating
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 of electric cars is five dollars per kilometre while their fossil-fueled
car
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 counterpart is fifteen dollars per kilometre. Using electric cars is truly an effective way to save money. In conclusion, electric-powered cars are environmentally friendly because it does not emit carbon dioxide and using
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ar is
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cost efficient
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.
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 type of
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 should be used and fossil-fuelled vehicles should be prohibited.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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