Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Children get good grades in school whenever they are encouraged rather than physically abused. I personally believe that good appreciation is better than punishment to encourage students to do well in school.

This

essay will discuss both sides by taking examples from newspapers and journals.

To begin

with, a good appreciation for students work would eventually help them to do hard work

next

time to show better results.

This

is because, it motivates the

child

to perform well to get good feedback from the

teacher

again, and fellow students

also

get inspired by those words from their tutor.

For example

, the recent survey from The New York Times revealed that 80 % of students are extremely happy whenever their

teacher

appreciated their work.

As a result

, they scored the highest marks in final exams.

Secondly

, torturing the student to get good scores in the exam could give good results, but

this

process will lead to affect their personal life. The matter of fact for

this

is, punishing the

child

in front of their peers would make them feel discouraged and they get paranoid at their

teacher

. Most importantly,

this

will make them lose interest in studies.

For instance

, a 12-year

child

in Japan got physically abused by their

teacher

for not performing well.

Therefore

, the

child

got a decent result in the exams, but mentally disturbed and got scared to attend school again.

Finally

, an encouraging word for the

child

would help them to study well. A punishing method could lead to discouraging them. So, I strongly believe that good support from the

teacher

would potentially help them the student to give their best, rather than abusing them physically before their friends.