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Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

#stress #illnesses
Nowdays
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, Mental health has become very
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. Many people are now suffering
with
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 depression and anxiety.
This
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people suffers from extreme depression and more likely to have more panic attacks
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 to their older peers. One of the main
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of
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this
 medical trend is social media. Social media websites like Facebook or Instagram, where people posts
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their
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 best versions of their selves which leads many other people to believe that their lives are
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 and they feel bad about
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their
 current situation. Social media has made people
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believe that whatever, they are seeing is real and perfect.
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 promotes people comparing their lives with what they online, and not having what other people have
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 in negative thoughts.
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what
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 of achieving tasks can drive people insane.
Work
enviroments
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environments
environment
 matters a lot,
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, Employers who are in constant pressure by their employer, are more
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 to stressed out.
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 pressure of achieving unreasonable targets creates
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oxic
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 environment. They always live in fear of losing their jobs, which can be harmful
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thier
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their
 mental health. To counter these issues, I believe, It is very important for people to understand the online world.
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 should promote body positivity and try to showcase
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nfiltered world.
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instead
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iltered and fake version of our selves, we should strive to be raw and real in our social media presence. And, Employers should assess
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 environment,
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 what circumstances are bothering their employees. It is an organization
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work
 environment for their employee. To conclude, I believe we all have a moral responsibility towards our society,
instead
 of spreading hate, we should be focusing
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 promoting positive news.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technological advancements
  • constant connectivity
  • job demands
  • work-related stress
  • societal pressure
  • achieve success
  • erosion
  • work-life balance
  • exposure
  • negative news
  • social media comparisons
  • chronic stress
  • mental health support
  • stigma
  • flexible work hours
  • stress management techniques
  • mindfulness
  • access to mental health services
  • community support systems
  • emotional support
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