At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages ?

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The given maps illustrate how the Islip centres
looks
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currently and how it is expected to look in the future. Overall, The Islip
town
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is planned to grow significantly. With some new facilities and new infrastructure arrangements. Currently, The Islip centre has a main
road
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that crosses the
town
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from the west side to the east. Along
this
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main
road
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, there are shops on either side of it. The main
road
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has two alternative ways. The
first
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one is located before the shops and it
conducs
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conducts
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toward a school in the south-west of the
town
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. The
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one is placed at the end of the shops and it drives to a
park
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located in the East-south. The
town
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is
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provided with housing between the school and
park
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and
a
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countryside in the north. In the future, the main
road
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will
not
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longer be the same.
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, a dual carriageway will be built and it will be surrounding the centre of the city. Within the dual carriageway, there will be several facilities. On the
North side
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of the
road
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, there will be a new bus station, a shopping centre, a car
park
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and
a
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new housing.
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, there will be
a pedestrians
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way roughly where the main
road
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is now. Underneath the
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pedestrians
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way, there will be a number of shops that will be limited by the dual carriageway. In the future, the school and
park
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are expected to remain in the same location.
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