Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced

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Needless to say, waste management is a big challenge for every country. As we are developing, our daily needs are increasing rapidly, every package makes by us which all can be litter. In
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it means more
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, some of the people may not aware of how
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destroys the balance of our environment .
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, our expert hasn’t invented any recycling materials
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of not recyclable materials,
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is a reason why people keep using non-recycling material as plastic container and bags.
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keep growing.
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overnment can alter some policy in order to restrict some of the non-recycling items been using. For illustrate, Taiwan's
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have announced a policy. which is restrict all the restaurant or cafe can’t supply any disposable tableware and
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all the supermarket can not provide plastic shopping bag to customers. After a year we can see not more plastic or disposable
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on the street , our cityscape has been cleaner than before.
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overnment can reduce waste by education. school is the best place to educate our offspring to do recycling and be used to using their own silverware or reusable metal straw.
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if people can get used to it
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we can protect our environment. To sum up,
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overnment can use some policy or education to modify people concept about recycling and using the permanent tableware or straws in order to help with environmental conservation and reduce
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