You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Michael Scott and
i
am writing Change the capitalization
I
this
letter in order to obtain more information about the rumors
under a new mall being to Change the spelling
rumours
be construct
near Change the verb form
be constructed
itaim
village.
I was surprisingly told Correct your spelling
item
from
my tenant that a great company called Umbrella Corporation is about to start its operation in the Change preposition
by
next
two weeks. Therefore
some people around the neighbourhood have already seem come trucks carrying tractors, forklifts and so on parking near the street holmes where
supposedly the mall is going to be located.
I must express my total resignation in respect Replace the word
were
this
operation as well as local residents who are Change preposition
of this
also
very concerned and dissatisfied. Moreover
, it is important to express that it is unbelivable
the Correct your spelling
unbelievable
the
local council granted the authorization for the company had started to set up Remove the redundancy
apply
building
.
Considering all the statements above the local residents are aiming for a local meeting with Correct article usage
the building
this
local council so as to get more information related to this
enterprise and also
the impacts that may be caused around the local area, however
, whether intended that is
is not possible to arrange a meeting we also
require at least that the Mayor explain whats is the municipal position towards the Mall.
Looking forward to hearing back from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Mr.
Michael Scott.Change the punctuation
Mr
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite