You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like you to request

for

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information about the

seminar

that you are conducting during the

week. I am an electrical engineer in Kazakhstan and I am keen to take part in

this

work-related

seminar

Moreover

, it would be very beneficial for me to see modern electrical equipment which I can use on my projects.

Although

this

is an excellent opportunity to make contacts with different companies for

further

cooperations.

However

, I would like to know more information about

seminar

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the seminar

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for example

,the dates on which it is going to be held, the

detailed

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details

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about the program,

in addition

,I would like to know about the registration process, its cost, and whether accommodation includes of

this

payment. If the participants need to arrange their stay, I would appreciate

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you can provide

the

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list of the hotels nearby the

seminar

venue. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours Faithfully, Alibek Issagaliyev

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