Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.

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should be closed down

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their workers’ cruelty.

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some

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think

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reason is predominant, others think that

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can be useful in protecting

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of the latter. On the one hand, some

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are of the opinion that

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employees are violent, so

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should be cut down. In my opinion, these thoughts are the consequence of workers’ bad responsibilities.

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, these responsibilities include giving some water, food, etc. Because there are lots of situations when some tourists from other countries come to see wild

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like lions, cheetahs and hippos they will not be in their cages or when they will just lie down doing nothing. One clear example of

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is when I went to the biggest

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in our country, there were plenty of

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that did not have the will to do something.

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,

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group of

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believe that

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should be cut down. 

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, other

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admit that

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have lots of useful things for protecting their

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. If we say more specifically, these

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believe that

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can protect the

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that are in danger of disappearing.

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, we can take snow leopards. In our country, Kazakhstan, there are only a few of these

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and they were entered into our red book.

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book is the book with the list of disappearing

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. Snow leopards live in the mountains in Almaty in the south of Kazakhstan, so we can see these

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from the

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located in Almaty

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when I was in the Almaty

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I saw these

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too and I was shocked. Because, if we compare

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other

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in

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from other cities, they were in good condition and totally active for a long time.

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why the other group of

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admit that

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are good for protecting wild and disappearing

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. In conclusion, there were lots of debates arguing that

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are cruel,

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others think that

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are useful for providing better conditions for

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. Personally, in my point of view,

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are the best for all

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