Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should been encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays it is common students finish their college and go straight to

univerity

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university

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most people strongly agree if it. While

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some others believe

that is

more important for student

work

in places to serve the community

first

. Personally, I strongly believe that students must go

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ork to serve the society

first

and in

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essay will discuss both points of views.

Firstly

, the reason which some people after school the student must go through to university is to develop their acknowledgement quicker and more professional available.

For instance

, some workplaces have a lack of professionals

such

as doctor and nurse, and for theses career, it is important the students start their study earlier to develop their knowledge faster and be able to

work

. The Coronavirus was an example, some countries had to allow students to

work

in the hospital to help doctors and nurse because they did not have enough capacitive people.

On the other hand

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get a job as

plummer

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or mechanics is important to students have their time to think about what type jobe their really want to do and it helps the society

also

. Some career

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becoming less attractive to youngers because it does not bring the status of a good job, and because

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it is difficult

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ind professionals of these areas.

Furthermore

, it is important for the younger think about which careers they are looking for exactly,

for instance

when someone studied for years as a lawyer and after that

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he discovered that

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labour is what he likes to do. In conclusion, the lack of professionals in some areas of

work places

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is one reason that some people said it is important students starter they study soon after school. Whereas, others, include me, defend that it is good for youngs have more different types of job to discover what career he

want

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tudy.