Some people believe that a great difference in age between people and children is more beneficial. Do you think the advantages of a greater difference in age between them outweigh the disadvantages?

The number of couples that choose to have children at a much later

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to do so because they would have time for their relationship and careers.

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there are

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pros and cons to

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decision.

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, the advantages of

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much later in life allows couples to establish themselves and their careers. By doing

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, it ensures that they are

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emotionally and financially stable before taking on the responsibility of a child.

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, a couple in their early 20s would be less equipped with their finances to meet the demands of

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.

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, a professional couple in their

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to 40s would have had a rather comfortable sum to ensure that they can take on the

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responsibility

easily.

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, couples would have time to travel the world and explore without having to worry about their children.

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gives them a sense of freedom and

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, they can spend that time to build their relationship. These could be reasons why people would prefer having children at a later

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.

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, the disadvantages of

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late

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might bring about medical complications. It is a known fact that the risks of complications

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genders. These

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could range from miscarriages to irreversible defects to the foetus. Research has shown that women aged 35 years of

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and above are more likely to experience a miscarriage,

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compared to a women

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30 and below.

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, men experience a decrease in their

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testosterone

levels with

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, makes

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chances lower. The medical reasons could be a

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deterrent

for people to not wait for a great difference in

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gap as well. To conclude, given that there is freedom and financially before planning out

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, we should

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avoid the medical complications that arise from late pregnancy. I strongly believe, that in order to be fair to

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ourselves and the child, we should plan for

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as soon as we can in order to avoid the painful process that entails a huge

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difference and complications.