Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
It appears that an article is missing before the word newspaper. Consider adding the article.
The plural verb are does not appear to agree with the singular subject newspaper. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The noun phrase internet seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The word use doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The noun phrase newspaper seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase newspaper seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase internet seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase newspaper seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The article a may be incorrect. Consider changing it to agree with the beginning sound of the following word of.
The word variety doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It appears that there is a missing preposition after the word variety. Consider adding the preposition.
It appears that real time is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
The word one may be unnecessary in this context. Consider removing it.
The singular quantifier one is followed by the plural noun gadgets. Consider changing the noun to the singular or using a different quantifier.
It appears that an article is missing before the word newspaper. Consider adding the article.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma before the dependent clause marker because. Consider removing the comma.
The word belive doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general