Write about the following topic. Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
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these
world of digitalisation, mass Correct determiner usage
this
media
plays vital
role Add an article
a vital
to
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in
brodcast
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broadcasting
news
coverage in fraction
of Add an article
a fraction
miniutes
. Correct your spelling
minutes
Nexus
of reporter are so strong, thatCorrect article usage
The Nexus
celebrities
feels as if they are Change the determiner
celebrity
intrusing
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intruding
intrusive
in
their personal Change preposition
into
life
. This
essay will examine both view points
in Correct your spelling
viewpoints
details
. There is always a debate that a few famous Fix the agreement mistake
detail
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personalities
personality
are exploited by social Fix the agreement mistake
personalities
media
and some news
channels.There is no regulatory body for various media
to have controll
over their telecast, populance Correct your spelling
control
are
so Change the verb form
is
influnced
that they did not check Correct your spelling
influenced
about
their credibility. Change preposition
apply
These
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This news
news
spread like air in this
world of technology. For instance
, to increase there
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their
televesion
rate popularity, sometimes Correct your spelling
television
media
exaggerate truth
, and sometimes it happens after the Add an article
the truth
news
stars have to declare
the right information from their social Change the verb form
declared
media
account. Being star
,their Add an article
a star
life
is always in limelight
. As a celebrity, they are always in Correct article usage
the limelight
glass
house. Superstars and Add an article
a glass
the glass
media
are like two sides of one coin. When people achieve any milestones they want journalist
to cover their stories on Add an article
a journalist
the journalist
front
page, but they do not like coverage of their personal Add an article
the front
life
. Many times they avoid to speak
about their relationships Change the verb form
speaking
infront
of Correct your spelling
in front
media
. Correct article usage
the media
For example
, currently
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currently,
bollywood
famous star reha Change the capitalization
Bollywood
chkravarty
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Chakravarty
is
arrested byWrong verb form
has been
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the
media
is doing her job of covering minute details about her, for which their parents
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parent's
parents'
given
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have
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an application
application
in court to stop Fix the agreement mistake
applications
this
broadcasting as they are againt
it. In my perspective, though Correct your spelling
against
stardum
have always been in Correct your spelling
stardom
stadium
glass
house, still there should be censorship on Add an article
a glass
the glass
media
by Governmant
to Correct your spelling
government
controll
their activities. Being popular is not a crime, they Correct your spelling
control
also
have personal life
which they may not want to disclose publicly.To simplify, when two celebrities get married, Fix the agreement mistake
lives
media
tries to cover even their personal close momentsCorrect article usage
the media
in
their camera which should beChange preposition
with
stoped
. Correct your spelling
stopped
To conclude
, nowadays entertainment industry is biggest
industry, people Change the article
the biggest
Add a missing verb
are intrested
intrested
in watching Correct your spelling
interested
about
their favourite Change preposition
apply
personality
, but that does not mean reporters to become Fix the agreement mistake
personalities
detective
and expose personal information. There should be some Fix the agreement mistake
detectives
restriction
on Fix the agreement mistake
restrictions
this
telecast.Submitted by saloni on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite