Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.

Consumerism increasing vividly around the world, as people are becoming more aware of the products.
However
, policymakers often debate whether the purchase of similar products from anywhere across the globe holds merits or not. Globalization increasing the production of products has more beneficial effects than their demerits. Through the Globalization, every product can be accessed from any part of the country. People can easily purchase the products from local markets or through online shopping, due to which manufacturing companies exporting the products in a different part of the world which enhancing their economy. Through online shopping, people can quickly buy products of any brand through just browsing the website.
For example
, shoes of Nike or puma could be purchased from the local people’s.
Also
, Selling the products globally enhancing the free trade between countries and making a good relationship.
Moreover
, people get to know about the culture and specialities of other countries though global trading. As
last
year one of my friends offer me the Japan tea, it has a different taste than other local tea, so I thought to purchase it, but at that time it was not available anywhere, but now we can buy it from the local shops
also
.
Additionally
, it is
also
increasing the employment opportunities for people’s like trading the products in different countries or delivering to local people. Undoubtedly, Globalization of every product helping the developing countries in various sectors and making good political relationships.
Also
, People can buy international products from local markets easily.
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