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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is clear that living in a foreign
country
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 has its own benefits and drawbacks to consider. I agree with
this
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 statement,
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,I think that anybody coming to another provincial should respect the national
culture
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. In
this
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 essay, I would like to outline the social and practical problems. The social problems would be speech barrier, which means that an individual coming from another
country
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 might not be able to speak and understand the language which might be a problem as far a guy who is living in a
country
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, and a
person
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 who came in the
country
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. Another problem is linked to the language barrier, but it might influence the behaviour of others. An individual who comes into the
country
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 might offend others with their behaviour or language.
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; some cultures like English people prefer to be very polite and say things differently from other cultures.
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, a
person
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 who doesn't know how to behave in a particular
culture
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 might offend others around him.The practical problems would be a misunderstanding of
culture
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. That means that a
person
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 who visits other countries does not understand other
culture
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 and he behaves as he wants to. The
second
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 practical problem is finding a job. An individual who works in a foreign
country
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 might not be appropriate for people whom he serves.
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,if an individual works in a restaurant, the people who live in a
country
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 and they were born in that
country
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 might not respect and not like the behaviour of a
person
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 who works in a restaurant, it might be because the cultures are different. To summarize, it can be said that there are a lot of misconceptions which people have when they come in a foreign
country
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, and in my opinion and from my personal experience people should educate themselves in order to know how to behave in different situations with different cultures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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