Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Working in a motivational and encouraging

enviroment

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environment

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great blessing for a person. Though

these thing

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can easily be

misinterprated

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misinterpreted

or misconceptulized by many people and it defines how the work and working

enviroment

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environment

of the

organizationdepends

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organization depends

in

this

regard.

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-more working

enviroment

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environment

of a being

greatly

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helps them to

suceed

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succeed

in there life and there are may type of motivational factors that influence

this

,

insentives

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incentives

in form of money,

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mployee getting free Holidays and some times companies bear their living expense.

Also

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this

bring

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ot of workmanship , ability to rise in their profession and

likewise

impovement

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improvement

of their family status. Because of these factors

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there is a

tramandus

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tremendous

amount of

enviroment

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environment

for growth, happiness and health between both

employee

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as well as

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mployer.

On the contrary

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i

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even slightly disagree with these

pay

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payments

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on the basis of

produce

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products

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and sell, because it some time many bring

inormous

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enormous

unhealthy situations in which the workers work in very life

threatning

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threatening

circumstances

like

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i

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obresved

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observed

in

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institute native to my area i.e.

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aviation club that basically performs the duty to create

resbonsible

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responsible

Pilots.Due to incentive program inside the organisation

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there

is

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very dangerous

workpratices

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work practices

workplaces

taking place, like using of aircrafts extensively putting

l

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ot of stress and deteriorating the overall life of the plane which indeed can be very risky for the

stuends

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students

aswellas

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as well as

the training pilot therefor the whole institution is on risk. so

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like to conclude that the whole

narative

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narrative

is not bad, but high

amplasis

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emphasis

are needed to make it

fruitfull

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fruitful

for both the organisation and its force and

every one

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can take

benifts

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benefits

benefit

of it without stepping on

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anyone's

anyone

anyones

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grave.