It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, It is easy to visit

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andscape which was not allowed to have tourists.

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many scientists have

traveled

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for the research.

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change, some advantages and disadvantages have been

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so fast. Because of the research of hidden nature, we could have known how much damage has been made by

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uman.

Thus

, we can figure out how to fix the problems that we already created, and we can learn what is the best way to protect the earth from environmental issue.

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xtinction of the animals and discover new species. On the other perspective,

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ourism industry could be grown up. A lot of

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or photographers are always looking for some special spots, so it might be an interesting space for them.

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bad news. If too many people come and go, they would have needed facilities for visitors,

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as public bathrooms, restaurants.

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, people would want to progress

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as a principal. It could cause environmental pollution and destroy

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ild animal’s base. I have seen the news and it was a story about

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Amazon. Some people cut all the trees to make

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ighway. An expert who has been studying

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nvironment for a long time says

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decision can bring benefit at

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moment, but it

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disaster in the future.

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ros and cons are always following behind every

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we got to be aware of social problem every moment before we make a decision.