In many countries today, parents are able to choose to sent their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extend do you agree?

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gaining popularity these days.
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there is no unified verdict on
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to children today, I think, students being in
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schools may have difficulties later in life. In
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I will explain my opinion. Some parents believe that by eliminating the distractions it becomes easier to retain the knowledge that teachers offer.
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why they do not want their children to be in co-educational schools, because,
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especially
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, these students tend to not feel the
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, I consider, the average workspace does not make men and women work in separate corners. There is an expectation for everyone to work together. From my point of view,
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school environment is a place where young generation learns what life will be like when
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real world. Having both men and women in classes allow students of both
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to interact with a wider range of people and learn how to work with and talk to people of the opposite
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. Same-gander classes limit
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. Taking everything into consideration, I cannot agree with the idea that one
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education is better for children
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because they do not have an opportunity to learn communication skills with
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it may be easier for students to participate actively and do well academically at a one-
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