In many countries today, parents are able to choose to sent their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extend do you agree?

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disadvantageous

to children today, I think, students being in

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schools may have difficulties later in life. In

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I will explain my opinion. Some parents believe that by eliminating the distractions it becomes easier to retain the knowledge that teachers offer.

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why they do not want their children to be in co-educational schools, because,

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especially

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period, students of the

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opposite

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of gender roles and learn to pursue areas that interested them no matter what is considered socially acceptable for their biological

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. Despite

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, I consider, the average workspace does not make men and women work in separate corners. There is an expectation for everyone to work together. From my point of view,

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school environment is a place where young generation learns what life will be like when

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real world. Having both men and women in classes allow students of both

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to interact with a wider range of people and learn how to work with and talk to people of the opposite

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. Same-gander classes limit

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opportunity

. Taking everything into consideration, I cannot agree with the idea that one

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education is better for children

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because they do not have an opportunity to learn communication skills with

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it may be easier for students to participate actively and do well academically at a one-

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