some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that the way we live has been transformed dramatically for many years.
Although
it is sometimes thought that, currently, mankind is highly interdepended, the opposite group believes that people are
independed
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independent
. In my opinion, I firmly consider the present generation lives more freely than the old one because of the latest technological advancement. On the one hand, those who debate in favour of dependency claim that since society prefers to maintain a standard of life among its members, they often require highly sophisticated gadgets and equipment, which may not be locally available. Due to
this
, they purchase things from other places,
for instance
, in Kerala, they hugely
dependend
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dependent
on Tamilnadu, a
neighbhouring
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neighbouring
state, for various food products, vice versa as well. As modern facilities minimise various barriers, which was observed previously. And I support
this
argument as I think people are well connected in many aspects of
the
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life.
On the other hand
, the opponents of the above-mentioned belief consider that, now, everyone is self-centred, and hardly
seekinging
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seeking
support from others.
This
is because they can have whatever they require just a click away, which means, the online services allow them to access everything without anyone's
assistances
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.
For example
, banking, shopping, ordering food and booking services are now possible from the home itself and no need to ask help from others.
Thus
,
this
group argue that
the
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society is hugely
independed
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independent
. In conclusion, when some think that our global
villege
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village
is connected so well, another view is just opposite to
this
.
However
, in my concept
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the former's thought is true since the advanced technology bringing everyone closer. It is predicted that
this
situation would continue, even,
further
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interdependence
  • globalization
  • technological advancements
  • collective action
  • digital evolution
  • minimal reliance
  • direct interaction
  • empowered
  • access to technology
  • societal expectations
  • personal choice
  • leverage
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