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should children be allowed to make their own decisions. discuss both views and express an opinion

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In the modern era,children are more creative in the terms of education and competition.There is a concern emerged that would it be beneficial for parents to allow their children to make their own decisions.In
this
 essay,I will elaborate on both points of views and will give my peace of experience for
this
 statement in the following writing. To commence with,as all we know that beginning level of education have been developed,due to
this
 children are more intelligent and being more educated at the very early stage.
Although
 its parents' responsibility to teach their children how to make decisions and tell them what is good or bad for them.
On the other hand
,In a certain situation,we should allow our children to decide what they want and which method they prefer.
For example
,If a student wants to prepare his homework by helping their friends in order to get more knowledge and like to discuss the topic which is given by the teacher so that
this
 is good for them to do discussions
instead
 of to do alone with the fewer of ideas.
Thus
 a student can develop their ideas in the group discussions.
However
,there are
also
 some noticeable things which are needed for the parents to watch their children study as well as social life.
For instance
,If a student becomes addicted of computer games rather than to play sports games in the playground
then
 its parent's responsibility to make a decision to encourage them by telling outdoor activities
such
 as sports activities,exercise,yoga and many more.Some of the time children get influenced by other classmates who are lazy or do not prefer to do efforts in the terms of education and sports activities.The cure of the parents about which parents must respond to teach moral things to their children in order to make a good image in the society and as well as school. conclude,
although
 its parent's responsibility to learn to their children about life aspects and teach moral things.
On the other hand
,it's even good though if children start to make a good decision for his future .People should let them decide what they prefer but do not forget to monitor them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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