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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read every thing they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the next decades, I believe that people will not buy hard copies of
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books
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 because they are available on the internet in a cheap way.
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, they will be able to read everything when and where they need it because soft-copies
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 are easy to portable.
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, most
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,
newspapers
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, novels and references are available for reading online or offline like soft copies.
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, they are easy to download without money or at a reasonable and cheap price in the same edition which a person needs.
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, when I was in the University, I bought and downloaded all references and lectures which are required for my study from the internet freely.
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, In the bookshop, they were very expensive and in the old
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 the professor did not want them.
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, when
books
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newspapers
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 are available on the internet or can be downloaded easily, the desired reading materials will be portable by phones or tablets.
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, we can obtain
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 as audio, PDF files, or videos that make
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sense of easy and accessible
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 when, where, and how individuals want.
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, because I am a mother, I don't have much time to read at home. So, when I go outside by a bus or taxi. I invest my time in Reading my preferences using my phone or I can listen to a Book Reader. In conclusion, people prefer to decrease
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 which they carry in their pack bags
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 They want to read in the cheapest and easiest way. On the grounds of that, paper-based
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 will be extinct or rare in the near future.

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coherence cohesion
Your essay presents a clear and logical structure, making your argument straightforward and easy to follow. To enhance coherence further, you could use a wider range of cohesive devices and transitions to connect ideas more seamlessly.
task achievement
You've done well to give specific examples, such as your personal experience with university textbooks, to support your points. For an even stronger task response, consider exploring counterarguments to provide a more balanced view.
coherence cohesion
Make sure all paragraphs are well-organized, each with a clear main idea that is developed and supported throughout. This structure is key for coherence and helps your essay flow more naturally.
task achievement
Provides relevant examples to support main points, enhancing the argument's strength.
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Effectively uses personal experiences to illustrate points, making the argument more relatable.
coherence cohesion
Maintains a logical structure throughout, aiding in the essay's overall clarity and ease of understanding.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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