in the modern word it is possible to shop, communicate, work on the internet without a face-to-face conversation. do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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nternet's convenient, people have different views. An army of people CHANGE THE VERB FORM reckons The plural verb reckon does not appear to agree with the singular subject army. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement. show examples reckon that based on
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not need to go there. From my perspective,
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is a positive advanced. Is it is undeniable that
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nternet is more and more imperative toward people's lifestyle
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nowadays would
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more times compared to the past by using
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etwork.
For instance
,when the
internet
was still less common in some countries, people have to keep in touch
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each other by writing letters and they will be able to expect a long time for feedbacks. Whilst, with the development of social media at present people
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will be text messages, making video calls with their relatives easily and rapidly. Obviously
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that is
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.
Similarly
, with plenty of benefits of
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nternet for working people can sitting at home to do
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ssignment without
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their movement by using
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ehicle.
This
helps reduce traffic jams problem.
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, shopping through one click on the
internet
will supply for customer more reasonable choice about price, quality of products via many promotion programs when people buy staff on
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means. In summary, for what
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nternet must have more adds in the future to help people get more amazing experiences.
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