The internet is viewed as an excellent means of communication by many. However, there are others who would argue that it is actually destroying our communication skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Concerning the issue of internet's benefits for contacting
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us, people hold different views while an army of people reckon that the Internet is limiting in terms of everyone's ability to communicate.
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believe that Internet is one of the most helpful
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for improving communication skills for human. On the one hand, there are several
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why
this
medium is really helpful for communication.
First
and foremost, learning a new language through
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se of the Interner is not a bad choice. Namely, when we watch foreign movies in our spare time,
it's not only make
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us
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relax
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but
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us to access oversea languages easily.
Additionally
, in some situations that we meet
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ourist who need help, the translation tool is an impossible selection if we do not have plenty of foreign
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.
Therefore
, everything can be solved if we have internet support.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that abusing too much internet will have bad consequences. To detail,
this
tool may
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people become lazier, lack of meetings among friends and their relationships gradually narrowed.
Likewise
,
intyernet
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internet
can
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affect partly to children if the use in
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rong way. At
first
glance, some parents often put their child with an electric device when they too busy with work. Meanwhile, children will be exposed
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violent images and terrorism pics by chance. As a consequence, they can be many
of
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people
arround
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and lose communication skills in the future. In summary, for what
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been mentioned above, it can be affirmed that each view has its own merits and demerits.
Thus
, it is highly recommended that everybody should use the network appropriately to avoid the serious effects it could have.
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