In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some nations consider owning a

home

much more paramount than renting one. I personally believe that

this

trend is both beneficial and detrimental. There two major advantages of the owning a

home

, the

first

positive is people who have ownership may become more feelings of stability and comfort because they do not worry about complaining of landlord and stress related to

pay

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paying

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money for renting

h

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a

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ouse in the monthly as well. A person's own house,

for example

, is free to design and decorate his house in his favourite way, and whatever he wants to do. Another benefit is owning a

home

can provide

a

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security well.

This

is because they could be much

more safe

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safer

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than the others by their good neighbours or guard of

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an

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area

such

as

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ttack of thefts. Despite the benefits mentioned above, owning a

home

brings a range of drawbacks.

Firstly

, people who choose to owner's

home

by

talking

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taking

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a host of loans and end up repaying the amount over prolong. These groups are more likely to get

p

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the

a

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ressure of turning money.

Therefore

, they would have to struggle to balance

between

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their work and family.

Secondly

, owning a

home

have

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has

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to pay on certain taxes and insurance which are proportional

with

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to

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a large

home

. Middle class and low class are a case in point.

Hence

, they need to learn about how to manage their budget and sacrifice their personal hobbies or precious experiences of trips. In conclusion, in my opinion

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,

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the increase in owning a

home

has both beneficial and harmful effects.