In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some nations consider owning a
home
much more paramount than renting one. I personally believe that
this
trend is both beneficial and detrimental. There two major advantages of the owning a
home
, the
first
positive is people who have ownership may become more feelings of stability and comfort because they do not worry about complaining of landlord and stress related to
pay
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paying

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money for renting
h
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a

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ouse in the monthly as well. A person's own house,
for example
, is free to design and decorate his house in his favourite way, and whatever he wants to do. Another benefit is owning a
home
can provide
a
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security well.
This
is because they could be much
more safe
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safer

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than the others by their good neighbours or guard of
a
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an

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area
such
as
a
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the
an

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ttack of thefts. Despite the benefits mentioned above, owning a
home
brings a range of drawbacks.
Firstly
, people who choose to owner's
home
by
talking
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taking

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a host of loans and end up repaying the amount over prolong. These groups are more likely to get
p
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the
a

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ressure of turning money.
Therefore
, they would have to struggle to balance
between
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apply

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their work and family.
Secondly
, owning a
home
have
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has

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to pay on certain taxes and insurance which are proportional
with
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to

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a large
home
. Middle class and low class are a case in point.
Hence
, they need to learn about how to manage their budget and sacrifice their personal hobbies or precious experiences of trips. In conclusion, in my opinion
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,

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the increase in owning a
home
has both beneficial and harmful effects.
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