Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that countries should grow foods and serve them to their citizens
instead
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of importing them. I completely agree with
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opinion and think that producing
food
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products domestically is essential in today’s world.
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of all, I believe that producing
food
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across the
country
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leads to people access the foods by
first
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-hand and in urgent. Unless a
country
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produces its own
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food
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foodstuffs
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stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
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, its
food
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supply needs other nations’ bolsters.
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situation causes citizens
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to
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unsettled and unsecured against their
country
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.
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, lacking
of
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stable
food
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products in a specific city
initially
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can make
a
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chaos locally and if the
country
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proceeds to not produce these products, the chaos can expand countrywide. That’s why it is important to manufacture its own
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products as a
country
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on its own lands.
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, producing foods provides cost prices cheaper than importing them from another
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.
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, there is a strong relationship between prices and foreign trade. Countries which grow their own
food
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products can easily cope with inflationary trends and they know confidently
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a trend will recover in the long-run.
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, if there is no
wheat producing
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in a
country
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and that
country
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continues to not produce,
this
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circumstance brings about to increase wheat and its derivatives’ prices progressively.
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, countries need to produce their foods themselves to hold
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inflation at a lower band. To conclude, I strongly believe that producing its own foods as a
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is important for both its society’s serenity and its economic system’s stability.
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