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Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that countries should grow foods and serve them to their citizens
instead
 of importing them. I completely agree with
this
 opinion and think that producing
food
 products domestically is essential in today’s world.
First
 of all, I believe that producing
food
 across the
country
 leads to people access the foods by
first
-hand and in urgent. Unless a
country
 produces its own
food
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stuffs
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, its
food
 supply needs other nations’ bolsters.
This
 situation causes citizens
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unsettled and unsecured against their
country
.
For example
, lacking
of
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stable
food
 products in a specific city
initially
 can make
a
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chaos locally and if the
country
 proceeds to not produce these products, the chaos can expand countrywide. That’s why it is important to manufacture its own
food
 products as a
country
 on its own lands.
Secondly
, producing foods provides cost prices cheaper than importing them from another
country
.
In other words
, there is a strong relationship between prices and foreign trade. Countries which grow their own
food
 products can easily cope with inflationary trends and they know confidently
such
 a trend will recover in the long-run.
For instance
, if there is no
wheat producing
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 in a
country
 and that
country
 continues to not produce,
this
 circumstance brings about to increase wheat and its derivatives’ prices progressively.
Thus
, countries need to produce their foods themselves to hold
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inflation at a lower band. To conclude, I strongly believe that producing its own foods as a
country
 is important for both its society’s serenity and its economic system’s stability.
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