Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

No

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can deny that we are living in a modern world where certain kind of

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has accelerated significantly, including economic, educational progress, and so on. Some governments are of the opinion that the most crucial aspect to achieve their

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goals is economic

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.

On the other hand

, many argue that other aspects of

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should be encouraged as much as

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society. In the following paragraphs, both

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and the reasons to support each dispute will be discussed in detail. On the

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hand, law enforcement agencies in many countries around the world have focused on

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conomic issue, as it is able to

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the success of each government’s scheme in case they have the great ability to bring their

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economy

in its zenith point among other countries.

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,

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success and

development

might persuade citizens to believe that these parties have the capability to take control and might be selected in the

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election to continue their works for the

next

few years.

On the other hand

, other society’s issues are vital as well as

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. As we can see in a number of countries, especially in Europe, raises education to be the

first

priority among other topics. Take Finland as an example, students are motivated to seek their own personalities and preferences since they were young. By doing

this

, not only their parents and

also

the government are able to support these children to walk through several struggles, reach their destination and be a good quality person in society.

Moreover

, these professions will have the ability to resolve the economic issues as well. To conclude, some governments will take advantages on making the progress in

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conomy in order to gain residents’ attention,

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, many

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to young children is

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important, since it culminates in the progress of

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conomy. All things considered, I suppose the

development

of other issues, especially education is as practically important as

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because the nation improvement requires the

development

of various aspects of society.