Some people believe that having a conversation on a mobile phone in a public or crowded place should be banned. Others feel that we should be able to talk wherever we like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, smartphones have become a part of our everyday life. Many today increasingly believe that people can not talk on cell-phones anywhere they want and it should be forbidden in public places.
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, there are people who think that they are free to choose when and where to talk on the
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of all, in public or crowded places some individuals usually talk really loudly especially using a headset and it interferes with people around.
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problems for people who have special work,
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as bus drivers. In public transport, sometimes, we can see an announcement ‘’Do not talk on the
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near the driver``,
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, it does not stop some people.
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why there is an opinion that in places of
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must be banned.
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, maybe a person has occupation bounded with telephone calls.
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, sellers or people who have important calls every day like doctors, military and
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parents. I believe that in general, both the points of view are correct, it depends on different situations.
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, if all of us start thinking about others when talking on the
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we would not have any problems and prohibition in social life. In conclusion, I would say that smartphones became a part of our everyday life and it is very difficult not to use them everywhere. But it would be a great idea just to limit calls for
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