Being a celibrity –such as a famous film start or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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world, many people wish to be a famous character or sporter.

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attention will bring problem and benefits to personal life.

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essay will aim at the causes and interest in being famous.

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of all, being a famous man will bring problems for your family. On other words, journalist and fans will follow every move you step.

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, if some times you made a mistake the consequence will be double than a normal person.

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shows the disadvantage of being famed between the community. On other hand, the advantage of being a celebrity much more from its disadvantage.

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, the benefits are having good relations and fans that love you.

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, communicating with others is needed for some situation, if you were in a problem they can help you. The result of

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would benefit has impacted more than problems. In conclusion, there are causes and interset for family life.

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, there is an advantage

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as good relations and disadvantage like problems more than a normal person. I would encourage people that have an interest in being a celebrity to go forward.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

190 words

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