Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that menageries are barbaric towards creatures and must be shut down , whereas some agree to it being helpful in shielding them. In virtue of increasing the breeding , many animals are subjected to captivity without required necessities.
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firms must be ended .Displaying animals as a form of entertainment has transformed itself into a racket over a period of time. These beasts are poached from forests, bonded and exhibited as features on family holidays . Linking Words
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