You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, It has come to my attention through

local

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newspaper- The Times that a shopping complex is going to be constructed near the Florence Street suburb. Through the aforementioned

source

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,source

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I have got to know that it would be a 30-acre project, and will commence construction on Dec 14th. As you are aware

this

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residential area and being in the suburbs, there aren't

much

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many

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transportation solutions for residents other than driving one's own vehicle.

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, the traffic conjecture that will shore up simultaneously as there is only a single way road that connects us to the city. As

this

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news is quite disturbing, I would request for the shopping centre's blueprints for their own car parking. Along with the

implementation-plans

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to increase public transportation facilities for residents. I will await your response and looking forward

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it. Yours faithfully, Christian

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

144 words

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