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Writing Samples
Band 7.5

You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr Sullivan: explain why you are writing describe your qualifications and experience explain how they can contact you?

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Dear Mr.John, I am writing
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 to you to express my interest in the job as a
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 instructor that was advertised in the magazine “The Professional” in April. I would like to apply for the position that you offer. I have completed my post-graduation in
Spanish
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 and
graduation
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 in a teacher training program. I have been working as a
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 instructor at the Institute of
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 in Karachi for the past 2 years, and I hold a valid teaching license.
Last
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 month I was awarded best
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 teacher of the institute. You can reach me via email at [email protected] or by phone at 021334545. I am available for an interview at your earliest convenience and look forward to the opportunity to discuss how my skills align with the needs of your institute. Thank you for considering my application. I am excited about the prospect of contributing to your institute’s language program. Yours sincerely, shahid

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter is well-organized with a clear beginning, development, and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs effectively to separate different ideas or topics.
task achievement
Expand on your teaching experience by giving specific examples of how your experience has prepared you for this role.
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Check for any possible grammatical errors or typos to maintain a professional tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Consider including a polite sign-off at the end of your letter for a professional and courteous ending.
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