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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In most of the countries, very less proportion of people are getting high pay. There two view for
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 like : some people thinks getting high pay is profitable for
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 where as others think
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 should not give high pay after certain level. I am agree with some extent that
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 should not allow
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 hike after a certain level.
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, getting very high pay
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 for some less developed countries because there source of earning could be less in
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 kind of countries. But there are some problems
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 for
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 because to earn or to get high
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 people leaves their family, their
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 and will settled down to other
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 and will work for other companies .
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: In America most of the companies pay very high as compare to other countries so most of the youth generation go there for work.
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,
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 should fix limitation for
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 because every people would not get the same
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. Some people would get very high
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, some will get the medium and some would get very low
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. The people who gets very low
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 they will be impacted by the highly paid people
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: corporate companies would have some fixed of budget for a financial year. If company will pay extremely high pay to some people who are already getting high
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.
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 in that case, people will get impacted who are already getting low pay. In conclusion, Giving extremely high pay could be beneficial for a
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. But i am completely agree with that
government
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 should limit the salaries after a certain level because other employees who are already getting low pay they can
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 get the chance to grow.

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