These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children’s behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

In

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present world, an act of violence broadcasting on

television

is constantly on the rise.

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is without a doubt that it will bring a detrimental impact on children‘s acts when they glue their eyes on those

television

programs. It is agreed that violence scene should be prohibited on

television

broadcasting. Analysing the increased numbers of juvenile delinquency reporting cases and

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upsurge of young people dropping out of the schools with the rising amount of violent scenarios broadcasting on

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will prove

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. The most obvious point is that children

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under the developmental stage who are not mature enough to distinguish the correct message they receive from social media.it is widely known that they will be persuaded without their notices to solve the problems by behaving aggressively against the law in

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society. A large scientific

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indicates that teenagers watch violent

television

would increase the likelihood of aggressive behaviour.

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overnment should

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certain regulations to reduce the unhealthy

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storylines transmitted by media. Another point should not be overlooked is that adolescent often

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violent media consumption daily who will be higher chance to affect the chemical transmitted materials in their brain and in turn lead them not to sleep well at night. A scientific study carried out by Harvard university recently indicates that a group of students daily receive

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iolent message from

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who would be difficult to concentrate their academic activities and achieve unsatisfactory results in their school years.

As a result

, parents should pay their attention to limit their children to have

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violent screen exposure during their leisure time. In conclusion, watching violent content from

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elevision screen is proved to have a link with their aggressive behaviour and poor concentration in their study lives.

Hence

, it is advisable that reduction the children to consume violent

television

is necessary at all.