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It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should governments place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of fast food consumed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Some research proved that eating junk
food
 leads to obesity among people.A section of people in society criticizes the availability of fast
food
 is easy. Is the government required to impose a tax on fast
food
 shops to decrease the consumption of fast
food
 by people
.
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This
 essay will provide reasons with relevant examples of
this
.
To begin
 with, Nowadays people work in long hours in their office and do not have to prepare their
food
 at home. So they started
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buy fast
food
 and consumed it.
Although
 they know the negative effects on junk
food
, they do not have an option in their busy schedule.
Moreover
, Fast
food
 shops are opened in front of their office to make a profit and do not consider their health-conscious.
For instance
, In the mall, Many Fast
Food
 Shop owners made their advertisement in a very attractive way to earn their customer to buy noodles,fried rice,potato chips and so on. Children and Young people started
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consumed it because it is very tasty and does not think about their health. These type of fast foods consumed by people every day which leads to obesity.
Moreover
, The availability of fast
food
 shops is more than restaurants in
this
 society. Fast
food
 shop owners identified that they can earn more profit with very less investment.
Besides
, they started applying more recipes to make their
food
 tasty to attract customer. People
also
 started consuming it due to taste in
food
.
Hence
 A section of people in the society blamed the government to force the tax on shops to reduce the people consuming fast
food
. In conclusion, I believe the government should create an awareness program to address the health effects on fast
food
 and impose a very high tax on these shops.
In addition
, the employer should not allow the shops to be opened in front of their office which would help their employee not to consume fast
food
.
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