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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

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Today we are living in
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 where education is affecting every area of human's
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. More or less, every nation in the
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 follows the western education system. A human or community without literacy is like jungle game. Nowadays many students prefer
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tudy abroad option due to various reasons. The countries like India and China where large numbers of students do their study for the different courses. Some of them are correspondent and others are on regular basis. Asian developing-countries has huge numbers of
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workforce
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. Today many people in the
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 enjoying quality
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 standard of living due to their study abroad decision.
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 decision allowed them to work in different countries
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 of
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 they emigrated. Their family members
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 because of improvement in financial condition.
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, a student from a poor country who successfully completed computer engineering get
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 job in western countries which changes his entire
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 completely.
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, various students face a huge gap between there educational course and actual job because different countries have different pattern and conditions.
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, a student who takes admission for the teaching course and learn how to handle 10 students in the class but after he came back to home country when and asked to handle 50 students his
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 will be more stressful. It is often seen that similar decision hit hard to
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oin-family concept. Study and settle abroad concept is very popular. When there are few benefits and more drawbacks to of it.
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