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Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree.Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #work #part #time #home
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In
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 modern era, Many jobs are becoming remotely doable especially after
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 Pandemic situation. World learn a new path to work from anywhere
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 of going to the workplace
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 it has its own many positive and negative consequences. Notwithstanding,
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 discourse delves into both viewpoints,and
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, will explore my own standpoint,in turns. From
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 perspective, some supports argue that
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 of the core boons of employment from house could be you do not have to commute every day for work.
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, another good point might be you can serve in any company in the world without a geographical limit to reach there physically.The reasoning is much likely due to the fact that
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 can relax and comfort while working as well as
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 can do household duties like taking care of children, house,etc.
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 private survey, More than 70% of workers in Toronto spend at least 2 hours daily in commute.
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, could there be pitfalls to
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 argument,Of course, it follows that worker will never get work atmosphere
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, they can not develop leadership
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