Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantage and disadvantages of this?

Multinational corporations are becoming more and more prevalent in nations that are still developing. A primary benefit of
trend is increasing employment opportunities.
, it
entails a drawback,
that is
, overconsumption of
. A major benefit of the increasing presence of multinational companies is that they generate a great many jobs.
That is
to say
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a company extends its presence to a new national territory, its offices and factories increase in number. These offices and factories
need people to work in them in jobs varying from managers to peons.
, more and more people get jobs.
For instance
, as per a report by, with the advent of MNCs,
as Fila, in India since 2001, the employment rate in the country has seen a consistent rise till 2020.
On the other hand
lead to overconsumption of electric energy.
In other words
, as the number of
companies rises, they need more
to run their operations. Whether it is the machines in their mills or their air-conditioned offices, everything requires a great amount of electric energy.
increased requirement leads to overconsumption of
, and,
, the world may run short of it in the future.
For example
, a recent survey in Pakistan showed that, in the
five years, it has been very difficult for the nation's government to meet the
requirements of its multinational cinema chains, Orbit and Inox. According to the survey, the cinema groups take up approximately 8% (which is very high) of the
produced in the country each year. In conclusion,
the increasing presence of multinational companies in developing nations is generating more employment there, it is simultaneously overusing their
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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