Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are many buildings that an aspect of

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traditional

history

and under the law policy. While some people think that they should be destroyed and build a new

one

instead

. In

this

essay, I will consider both sides of the argument. Nowadays,

as a result

of increasing population, our living area becomes

more dense

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. On

one

hand, to develop some new buildings is necessary for our life quality.

For example

, tower blocks can contain many people to live in.

This

can solve the problem of living.

Moreover

, new buildings are more high level of safety.

For instance

, in the wake of advancing technology science, there are optimize technology to build up a construction.

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can

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our equipment and safety.

On the other hand

,

history

is important to our

culture

. Our tradition contains our characteristic figure which makes our

culture

.

Hence

, governments set up some laws to protect those old buildings. If governments allow construction corporations to develop new buildings

instead

of the old

one

which contains

history

.

Consequently

, we would lose our

culture

. The best example is there is an old market

place

which is built in the 1565 year, and

this

was the original market

place

.

Thus

, it is a valuable

place

which is historical. In conclusion,

although

our living

place

becomes

more dense

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by the population increase, and some people believe that old buildings should be locked down to replace the new

one

.

However

, I strongly believe that it is necessary to protect our

history

by law

,

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because it recorded our

culture

and tradition which is figuring out our characteristics.