It is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medical research. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays there are numerous options available to have tasty meals, to wear outfits as well as to do field
research
. Before five years I was in the wrong impression that without animals, it is not possible to medical
reaearch
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or to have dinner. But Today,
Icertainly
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I certainly
agree with those people, who against apply killing animals as everything is possible to do without killing innocent animals.
To begin
with, In Medical
research
, Interns were used to experiments on live animals.
However
, students are able to study the same theory with the help of
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atest technology
such
as youtube videos,
research
papers, e-books.
In addition
to that, Interns are now
also
provided with the facility to attend the live operation on Human
body
or on Animals whenever actually Doctors needed to operate to get animal out of disease. That way people can certainly able to save animal's precious
life
.
Secondly
, We know that some people wear
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clothes, that made with the skin of animals. Before
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ouple of decades, People was not having any options to wear outfit
such
as winter jackets made with hard fluff from animal skin that helps to protect the human
body
in winter from very low temperature. But If we think of today's date, We are now having polyester material available
that is
originally made from plastic and it can help in minus temperature to survive.
Besides
that, Few girls wear shrugs, which made with Lion's skin just for the fun or show-off.
That is
totally unnecessary and
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overnment should definitely take precautions by making some laws to save innocent animal
life
. Non-vegetarian Food is another essential topic to discuss. Almost 50%
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people used to eat killed animals
such
as meat, pepperoni, cow etc. On the other side, there are other 50% people can
also
live
life
with only eating vegetables, some menu made from
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ariety of flour. One
research
from Hawerd university shows the data that almost 59.4%
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people belives that meat is having the protein content that helps the human
body
to stay energetic.
However
, 69%
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people
also
agree that by eating lettuce and having one glass cucumber juice, it will provide 99% protein content to the human
body
. That means
,
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It is not at all a requirement to eat animals to survive on
this
earth. To put it in nutshell, I pen down with getting agree with those people, who really feel to save animal's
life
by avoiding its use in
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products, or in food. It will be ultimately helpful to survive on
this
earth.
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