Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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AThe revolutionary advancement in modern technology has endowed people with substantial resources for their survival in the best possible way. The availability of
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ariety of facilities has enabled the people to choose inalienable beneficial opportunities to adopt in their lives.
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, there are sections of society that cannot afford even basic necessities. For them these choices are out of reach,
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I partially agree with the view. In the present era, human beings have exponentially increased the number of options to avail in different fields like
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, transport and business due to many reasons.
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, the creative methods to produce
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ariety of
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and its preservation have benefitted
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human population with
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rovision of significant types of edibles during the entire year.
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, non-seasonals can be bought from the
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market irrespective of the weather conditions due to modernized preservation methods.
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, while
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, we can opt for many choices, according to affordability and convenience, due to inventions of faster ways of transportation leading to
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evolution in transport hubs.
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, the advancement in education and development has endowed people with
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vailability of
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normous number of professional fields to succeed in their lives. There are,
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, unequal distribution of positive aspects of technology. Many underdeveloped countries are lacking the basic necessities to survive like
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, health and financial resources.
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of having choices, they do not have an option to avail the fundamental human rights. To illustrate, the research data by WHO shows that 45% of
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opulation does not have access to clean water supply; 35%
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people are spending a substandard life.
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, certain job and study courses are limited to developed countries only, leaving
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devoid of these advantages. In the light of the arguments I have hitherto considered,
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conclusion is evident that, undoubtedly, people have access to many choices to enjoy in their lives but there is
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nequal distribution of beneficial resources. Everyone should have
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qual approach to all types of advantageous impacts of modern technology , and foremost, there should be
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rovision of at least fundamental human rights.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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