International travel makes people prejudiced rather than broad minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?
In the modern world, travelling is vital in order to obtain knowledge about other cultures. With the help of travelling,
people
can see how others live, how they proceed with their lives and so on. However
, obtaining knowledge about those aspects may lead to a situation Change preposition
in that
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which
people
could be prejudiced. There are several reasons for this
problem. Limited travelling period
and overgeneralizing the situations can be examples of those reasons.
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Firstly
, in our modern and busy world, it is not always possible to travel during long days. People
generally have limited time
since the modern world requires more responsibilities. So, in this
limited time
, travellers try to learn a new culture or try to know how locals live. Actually, it is generally impossible to learn all about the culture if you do not spend more than 2 weeks in a city/country/town. For example
, if someone faced
with a biased or rigid behaviour of local Add a missing verb
is faced
people
, this
may lead to prejudice. In order to get better knowledge about culture and local people
, travellers should spend qualified and enough time
in the town.
Secondly
, overgeneralizing is one of the reasons for the biases of international travellers. For instance
, during travel, people
may meet lots of different people
. Some of them can be arrogant, rude, selfish or impolite but this
does not mean that all the people
are the same. People
should not overgeneralize the acts of one person to all locals.
In conclusion, limited time
and overgeneralizing are the basic obstacles for
broad-minded behaviour. Spending more Change preposition
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time
in the travelled city and meeting lots of different people
and also
analyzing them separately may solve the problem. People
should not be biased until they know the truth.Submitted by aydanszade on
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