It is becoming increasing popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university.what are the advantages and disadvantages for this?

One
year
gap
between completing
school
and enrolling to
university
become a trend among students.Having
one
year
gap
would help a student to prepare to get
admission
in the best universities rather than in normal
one
but there
are
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drawback
also
. On evident of
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enefit of having
one
year
gap
of
school
completion and enrolling for
university
is that it would help the student to prepare to get the
admission
in the best universities.
In other words
, If students would spend some
time
for
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est universities entrance exam that would shape their career and future rather than taking
admission
in
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ormal
one
. Another reason is that to be prepared for college/
university
culture or curriculum since there is much difference in
univeristy's
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universities
university's
university
and
school
's curriculum.In colleges, we do have seminars, semesters which lasts only for 3 months only and we have to finish our semester syllabus within
the
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short period of
time
. On other hand, there are
drowbacks
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drawbacks
of having
one
year
gap
between
school
completing and enrolling in
univerty
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university
.
Firstly
,waste of
time
, if planning is not done properly
then
there would be waste of
time
.
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taking a
year
gap
a person can take
admission
in
university
to save the
time
As a result
,
this
will save the
one
year
of
experienc
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experience
and that would help him to get the
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experience which is vital.
For example
, most of the students who took a
year
of
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ap they do not extra than who
entrolled
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enrolled
in
university
without any
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. In conclusion,
Although
the decision to take the
one
year
gap
is good for those who are very serious for their career, future and are very dedicated for their studies.
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  • traveling
  • life experiences
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  • self-reliant
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  • financial burden
  • academic momentum
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