Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading to buy things . Others people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days
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ommercial industry is increasing their success phenomenally. A certain group of individuals believed that any product gains popularity and demand by powerful
advertisment
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advertisement
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However
, others opine that ads are so pervasive and there is no longer any need to follow them. In my opinion, proper advertisement of products makes their sales high enough. In
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essay, I will emphasize on both these arguments and give my opinion in the end. To commence with, marketing strategies and advanced technologies are playing a pivotal role to expand the sales of goods. Marketers need to introduce techniques
such
as hefty discounts, captivating packagings, and lucky draws to boost their sales.
Moreover
, modern online techniques focus on users of mobile applications like youtube,
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and Instagram to see their ads on pop-up and banners.
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.S.A showed that
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rise in online Shopping
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through
throughout
the world.
Hence
, with remarkable policies, advertising companies can expand their sales of stock.
On the other hand
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ombardment of commercials everywhere, people are reluctant to see them and pay no heed to them. Customers nowadays demand high quality and they never rely on the context of ads. To exemplify, people watching online ads always consider to see the review of products by users and
then
decide whether to buy to them or not.
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on people's perspective that those online advertises are relevant or irrelevant. In conclusion, Advertisements role in marketing the
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roduct gradually increases worldwide. It
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depends
on how the product is being launched, its efficient qualities, its durability and so on.In my point of view, advertising industries
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to pay great attention to their marketing activities in order to get full success.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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