Parents, usualy mothers, give up work, choose to stay at home and look after family. Some people think that the government should give them salary. Do you agree or disagree. Give reasons from your own knowledge and experience.

Family is
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ital part of societies. It generally consists of parent and children. Even though it is everybody's responsibility to look after children and
home
, usually, mothers give up work and get the responsibility. With
this
help of mothers and
also
a sacrifice of mothers, families stay together and all member of a family, children, husband and wife, are happy and satisfied. Since there is happiness at
home
, there will be happiness and peace in society. And nobody can deny the importance of the mothers. So, I agree that the government should give them a salary and the reasons will be discussed.
Firstly
, if a day of a mother (or a father) is taken into consideration, they wake up, prepare breakfast, follow daily
home
duties, take care of kids' education, take care of husband's clothing and so on. At the end of the day, probably they end up doing a lot of work than normal working people do.
For example
, during the whole day, accounting specialists finalize only their job requirements. They do not help, normally, other departments or they do not take care of their colleagues' responsibilities. So, as an accounting specialist, even more, the mother should be paid by the government since they commit themselves to their
home
.
Secondly
, a mother (or a father) is the best and the
first
teacher of our lives. They teach us how to behave to others, how to act in public, how to talk to someone and so on.
For instance
, we learn from our parents that when we are in public we should not talk loudly or when we get
home
from school, they are our teachers at
home
. Since the authority pays for teachers, they should pay for a parent who commits themselves to their children's education. They generally contribute to the public as much as teachers. In conclusion, our parents that they give up their works in order to enhance our lives should be paid by the government. Their contribution to the community cannot be unseen. They commit themselves to their family as much as other workers commit themselves to their jobs.
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