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Some people say that it is better for children to grow up in a city, while others say that growing up in the countryside is better. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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There is currently a contentious argument over whether lifestyle in the great metropolis is considerably more valuable in comparison to the rural area. I totally agree with the former opinion since in the city people have more job opportunities and
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 more infrastructure to attend their needs. The main reason I believe that in the cities people may have more opportunities is due to the fact that there is more position offers available since a great portion of the greatest companies prefers to set their headquarters in the central areas.
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 companies in the same place which is downtown, must bring more positions available. It is
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 important remarks that companies rather count on people who live near their work so as to provide more quality of life for their employees.
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 landscape, people might take more than two hours commuting between their homes and the job in the city and as a consequence, even though,
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 can decrease their quality of life so that companies prefer to hire someone who lives in a near localization. Important remark that despite the existence of jobs in the land, people try to go to the cities in order to ger more high salaries. Another reason why I support the livelihood highly recommended in the city is owing to better infrastructure in comparison to the terrain.
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, rural people, who are the people who live outside the cities, can reach hospitals or public transport easily while in the rural area there is a lack of these structures since there is a lower investment from governments or even private corporations. To illustrate, it is a completely normal country people move to cities when become seek or even to have a better quality of lifestyle by using the structure in the big cities
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 in lesser conditions in the terrain. In conclusion, I completely agree that
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ifestyle in the cities is away better compared to the scenery because of their infrastructure as well as their work opportunities. Given
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 situation,people should always consider moving to central areas
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