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There is little control over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and people can build in whatever style they like. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is true that limited
regulation
 allows people to design their houses and
office
 buildings freely on
its
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 forms.
Although
 some benefits of
this
 can be seen, I am the opinion of that drawbacks exceed. One of the considerable benefits of having slight restrictions on construction of houses and
office
 buildings is that it can be a famous landmark. Since fewer restrictions make it possible to create a unique appearance by adding colours and unfamiliar shapes, the uniqueness gathers people’s attention and will be well-known. Taking Casa Milà as an example, the originality of the house fascinate people all over the world and registered as a World Heritage Site. Designing houses and
office
 buildings freely leads to making new famous architectures so loose
regulation
 on its forms seems to be advantages.
Nevertheless
, I believe that drawbacks of limited
regulation
 on houses and buildings are greater than its benefits because it can trigger spoiling the beauty of a town scenery. Without strict restrictions on
architecture
 styles, it is hard to protect the beautiful view of a city, which usually involves consistency in appearance.
For example
, Kyoto sets a limit on
architecture
,
such
 as colours and heights. Due to the strict restrictions, new houses and
office
 buildings match the traditional townscape. Lax
regulation
 possibly damages the beautiful scenery of a city that comes from the uniformity of buildings;
therefore
, the negativity of less
regulation
 on design and construction new
architecture
 prevails. To sum up, slight
regulation
 on
architecture
 allows freely building and can be beneficial.
However
, I believe that drawbacks are superior to their benefits because loose restrictions on building styles hinder the unified beauty of a city.
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