It is believed by many most of the world’s problems are caused by overpopulation, but others do not think so. To what extent do you agree with the statement?

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Overpopulation is one of the major concerns in certain nations. It has long been a subject of discussion that excessive population is giving rise to most of the issues that nations are facing around the

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. My view does not coincide with the given proposition for a number of reasons as there are many other more concerning factors that are responsible for several problems around the

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which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs. There is a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most telling one lies in the fact that excessive increase in population is not the universal concern but is limited to certain developing countries but global warming is. Not only, the territories which are under development are suffering from

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problem, but the developed nations

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have to face consequences because of global warming.

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, climate change is one of the major effects of

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ncreased amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere which can be seen all around the

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either it is China or America. Resultantly, the earth is getting converted into a fireball which might play a key role in decreasing the chances of life on earth.

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, various animals and other species have to lose their habitat which can be attributed to global warming. Because of

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, there are many species that have become extinct and some are on the verge of extinction as they cannot survive without their natural habitat.

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, a bird lived in Argentina was able to survive in that temperature but due to global warming temperature has risen there and ice has melted which has made that bird's survival impossible there.

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, it has a great impact on ecological balance many and impacting the survival of many other creatures as well. To summarize, overpopulation is a menace which is linked to just

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ew nations but not all parts of the

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, global warming needs to be prioritized to be resolved as it has a great impact on

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