nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. why do you think this is happening? what can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced. give reason and examples.

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ncreasing amount of garbages. Civilians and Government both are responsible for
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the reasons and solutions of the litter problems. To commence up with the cause of rubbish.
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, The consumer market has been responsible for
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garbage
problem as well. While Groceries shopping they promote more and more pack food which has packed into the hard
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Cambridge University
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done a survey about the life of
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. It says polymer products required 12 years to decompose under the soil and If it
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to burn in an industry, It
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to produce 96% of Carbon-Monoxide in that produced smoke.
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, The Clothes shops
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large and heavy quality of
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bags while purchased clothes.
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, everyone sale free
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with purchased and people through that bag into the garbage when they reached
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home and organized their clothes. On the solution side,
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and Foremost, Government should
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plastic
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bags.
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, The Municipal corporations should
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awareness events for
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ublic, where they can receive peer knowledge about how to reuse, recycle and decompose the litter
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. What's more,
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ocal government would encourage to
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of separate
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garbage
bin for kitchen
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, so they can dump
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wastages
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in recycling machine.
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, that
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transfered
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transferred
into fertilizer products, which could
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for street's plants and trees foundation. All in all, Individuals should have to avoid the
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of hard
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products. And, Government needs to develop certain
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thickness of
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bags which would be suitable for degradation without damaging
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nvironment.
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