Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both views.

Media is an inevitable part of
this
modern society. That the famous personalities should not be followed by the media to click their photographs anywhere to made them viral which might create privacy concerns is a subject which provokes both stark opposition and great enthusiasm, and at times both become somewhat blurred. There are strong arguments on both sides of the debate. I will discuss these factors in upcoming paragraphs along with my view. On the one hand, people who consider taking pictures of celebrities by paparazzi to be unethical say that it does not allow them to live their
life
independently. Not only, do they have to think twice before doing something in public because of the fear of being caught by the media, but they
also
have to face harsh consequences sometimes because of
this
limelight.
For example
, there are times when private moments between celebrities are recorded by the media and are broadcasted on the various channels and social networking sites which make them take steps like
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uicide attempt.
Conversely
,
however
, people who think that spreading
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ews about their personal
life
is the price of their fame point to its certain benefits. It helps their fans to keep updated not only about their professional
life
but their personal
life
also
as they try to learn many things from them because various famous personalities act as a role-model for their fans. To illustrate, several fans like to follow the same daily routine followed by their favourite stars by reading about their personal along with professional
life
. To summarize, it appears to me that celebrities should be provided with privacy to enjoy their personal
life
, as every person in
this
world has the right to live freely and according to his own choice either he is famous or not.
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